To be honest, this is not one of my favourites. It’s too wordy – for my taste. The first three lines say all that is necessary and the rest is superfluous. Just my opinion.
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It’s okay! Haha.
This world is misery
I like this poem. It underscores needing some rain to appreciate the sunshine. Well done.
Thank you so much.
Oh, my goodness, it’s true that first we must feel it, before we can move on
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