To be honest, this is not one of my favourites. It’s too wordy – for my taste. The first three lines say all that is necessary and the rest is superfluous. Just my opinion. LikeLiked by 1 person
I like this poem. It underscores needing some rain to appreciate the sunshine. Well done. LikeLiked by 1 person
Lonely Blue Boy 
To be honest, this is not one of my favourites. It’s too wordy – for my taste. The first three lines say all that is necessary and the rest is superfluous. Just my opinion.
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It’s okay! Haha.
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This world is misery
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Yeah.
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I like this poem. It underscores needing some rain to appreciate the sunshine. Well done.
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Thank you so much.
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Oh, my goodness, it’s true that first we must feel it, before we can move on
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Yeah. 🙂
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