Loneliness
Loneliness,
Is like a young dove trapped inside a bulky cage.
Loneliness,
Is like a single letter trapped outside an empty page.
Loneliness,
Is like a quiet wind dancing around a hurricane.
Loneliness,
Is like a quiet old man dancing around and around his cane.
Loneliness,
Is like a fat cow without its precious milk.
Loneliness,
Is like a thin dress without its precious silk.
Loneliness,
Is like a colorful star that refuses to twinkle.
Loneliness,
Is like a colorful butterfly that refuses to mingle.
It’s such a beautiful poem. Depicts a true painting of what loneliness feels like. The metaphors are striking, all of them.
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Thank you. I’m glad you find it beautiful 🙂
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🙂
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Well written poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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like single letter trapped outside an empty page..liked it a lot..only this sentence was enough to describe loneliness..
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Thank you 🙂 It’s my favorite line actually. Haha.
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even mine 🙂
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Wow, this is beautiful, and such a nice flow to it 🙂 good work!
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!
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Beautiful piece
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Thank you 🙂
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Help me, your words stuck in my head! It’s beautiful in a tragic way…
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Wow. Haha. Thanks 🙂
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This is a really nice piece, well written and just great! 🙂
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Thanks!! 🙂
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Your welcome.
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